Pocketfold inserts-Opinions!

[BASIA]

So I got the invite inserts done. Let me know what you think.

They will be different size because paint is changning it on me but u get the idea


http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b7da32b3127cce83474004fe8900000016108Aasm7Fu1aN8

http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b7da32b3127cce8347401cfe9100000016108Aasm7Fu1aN8

http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b7da32b3127cce834740077fba00000016108Aasm7Fu1aN8

http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b7da32b3127cce83474002fe8f00000016108Aasm7Fu1aN8

http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b7da32b3127cce83474000fe8d00000016108Aasm7Fu1aN8 It says RSVP at the top but it got cut off

[BASIA]

I forgot one more
http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b7da32b3127cce834763a7bea300000016108Aasm7Fu1aN8 it says website at the top but once again shutterfly cut it off

[carolinalady67]

Great job Basia, the only one I would change is the last one with the website information. It is to informal, more like everyday speach. The "or just anything that has to do with our wedding or us". I'd leave the word just out.

[BASIA]

Thanks Lisa! I was reading it earlier and didnt like it so that will be changed! Anything else.?

[Allyson]

Other than what Lisa said I think they're awesome!!! You did such a good job!!

[carolinalady67]

Nothing else I can see, you did a really good job. The lay outs are all nice and simple, easy to read, not cluttered at all. Your menu looks yummy!!

Just make sure to proof read, printing them all and THEN finding an error would suck.

It is going to be time to send them out soon :)

[jillian]

I would leave out "or just anything about the wedding or us" on the last page. You've already said for information on the wedding on the top line.

[Aramelle]

You've got a great start on these, Basia. :)

You should get rid of the ! on the accommodations page. Personally, I would get rid of all the !, but the one after Hotels in our area specifically is not needed.

Also, I think you should reword the description of the Filet Mignon on the menu card. Maybe say served with a bernaise sauce or served with a house made... The use of our makes it obvious you've just copied off of the venue's description and reads a little funny when coming from you, IMO.

I agree with Lisa on the web site insert. I would word it something along the lines of: For further details about the wedding, including directions to the ceremony and reception sites, please visit our web site.

I would also work to try to center the information for Accommodations and RSVP on the card more. That may be something that just got thrown off when you were doing print screens, but if not, I think they would "flow" more nicely if they were centered more on the card.

Lastly, you should be consistent with the formatting on the heading of the cards. All of the cards except Accommodations are in all caps, leaving that card to seem a little "off" compared to the others.

[BASIA]

Thanks Girls.

Aramelle you have good points thanks! I will get rid of all the !, that is just how I type.

You are righ, I took the description of the Filet Mignon from the website. I will correct that as well.

Will change the website info.

As for the centering it is off becuase of the print screen so that is not a problem.

And I also cough up with the accommandations being lower case and everything upper so that is already corrected. Thanks


Thanks Girls for all the help. If anything else that you can find let me know, because I want to print them within couple of week.!

Thank!