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Krissy
07-25-2006, 08:27 AM
Ok, I'm printing up the invitations for my sister's shower right now. On their registry her FH registered for a bottle of gatorade cause he thought it was funny (and he drinks it like it's going out of style) so we thought it would be great if everyone brought a bottle to the shower and then we'd have a gift for him when he came to help pick up the gifts.
I have these business size cards that match the invites. How can I word this?
For example.
Let's not forget about Brian! Please bring a bottle of gatorade with you.....blah blah.
I'm stuck and want to get these done today. Any ideas?
Deidre98
07-25-2006, 09:37 AM
Help us shower Brian with well wishes too! Bring a bottle of gatorade to help show him how happy you are for him!
Sorry, brain isn't really working yet. I will keep thinking on it though!
Krissy
07-25-2006, 09:43 AM
Yes, something like that! Thank you!
My niece came up with this one just now...
One small favor if you don't mind. Brian loves gatorade, bring your favorite kind!
Would that work? Anyone think of anything better?
Aubrey
07-25-2006, 09:45 AM
Krissy, I think your neice's wording is funny and cute, I think it would work. I know I'd be laughing if I got that, and I wouldn't forget the Gatorade! :)
Deidre98
07-25-2006, 09:53 AM
I think it's perfect!!! Sweet, simple, to the point, and funny!!!
Krissy
07-25-2006, 10:06 AM
Ok, now a friend came up with this....
Showers are for the Groom-to-be too,
that's why we are asking you
to bring something for Brian he'd never trade,
Of course....a bottle of Gatorade!
Which one now? Then i'm done asking. I was having such a brain fart and now I can't decide! lol
Thanks for your opinions ladies!
HelenAngel
07-25-2006, 10:44 AM
I like the first one but both are very cute. :)
Mandy
07-25-2006, 10:55 AM
I think the one your niece came up with is simple and cute...I'd go with it! What a funny idea :)
*heather*
07-25-2006, 11:01 AM
If I got that, honestly, I'd be so confused. I think you should say something about how he registered for it. Not everyone will look at the registry. Maybe something like,
During the registering process, Brian seemed to think that he and FW couldn't live without Gatorade. If everyone brings a bottle, he'll have everything he ever wanted!
Maybe not just like that, but you see what I'm getting at.
Maria 05
07-25-2006, 11:08 AM
I like the first one best
Krissy
07-25-2006, 01:31 PM
Thanks girls! I printed them all up. One more thing I can check off my list! :)
Deidre98
07-25-2006, 01:50 PM
What saying did you end up going with?
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